I’m sure many of you will
disagree with me because you love to escape into a different world when you
read. However, Downton Abbey would
lose its zing if costumes, sites, and key historic events in WWI and the flu epidemic
of 1918 weren’t described correctly. Even fantasy novels are enhanced by a few
facts. The evacuation of children to from London during the Nazi blitzkrieg is
the basis of CS Lewis’s Chronicles of
Narnia.
Points to consider when including facts in fiction
1. Create a strong
plot, and #insert facts to create realistic characters.
I’ll give an example from Malignancy. In this thriller,
a woman scientist tries to escape the clutches of a drug lord and accepts a
State Department assignment to set up scientific exchanges between the U.S. and
Cuba. However, the scientific community is less safe than she expected.
That’s the plot. One
of Sara’s surprises is Cuban researchers have patented a vaccine that is
thought to strengthen patients’ immune response against a certain type of lung
cancer. (Fact: The cancer
vaccine Racotumomab is in clinical trials now world wide.). Other surprises involve her love interest
and the dug czar. They are not based on facts. The scientific facts allow me to
show Sara’s expertise and ingenuity. They also keep her from being a busy body,
who wouldn’t be included in real exchanges among “diplomats” from Cuba and the
U.S.
2. Pick #relevant and exciting topics.
A great author can make any topic interesting but most of us
aren’t great writers. Readers are more apt to be interested in tales based on intrinsically
interesting issues—global warming or curing cancer. Michael Chrichton (Jurassic Park), Robin Cook (Coma), and Ian McEwan (Solar) were particularly skillful at
selecting scary high-tech issues for their thrillers.
3. #Use facts to turn
locations into strong characters.
Realistic locations improve any novel. Hemingway’s The Sun Also Rises would be pretty
boring without the hypnotic descriptions of the Festival of San FermÃn in
Pamplona. The decadence and beauty of Venice set the mood for Thomas Mann’s Death in Venice. The Cuba (I visited three years ago and depicted in Malignancy) is surprising and probably transient.
4. Be as accurate as
possible.
A writer of thrillers told me recently that readers accept a
couple inaccuracies in a novel if you have stated most of the information
correctly. I don’t know if that’s true. Certainly, Dan Brown has been
criticized for inaccurate historical information in his best selling novel, The DaVinci Code, but he certainly
included enough facts to ignite readers’ interest.
Why not pick up
copies of Malignancy and see if you
like facts in fiction, too? Malignancy won first prize in the 2015 Public Safety Writers annual contest.
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